you got them up. congrats! is that an eye? that is a bit frightening and odd, dont you think? either its an eye or a lense, but the two together make it seem like a futuristic cyborg thing perhaps. simplify the layout more, but i do think the type and color are effective.
I agree that the eye or lens is a little disconcerting. It seems a little alien and I am not sure it is working with what you have going on so far. Maybe try blending the pixel idea with the lens a little more so that it becomes a unit. I do like the monochromatic idea you have for each of the programs.
I think the colors work well. It's a little bit busy on composition but the overall layout looks nice. I'm just not sure about the way you divided the panel to 3 areas... maybe you can try to invert the colors?
you got them up. congrats!
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that is a bit frightening and odd, dont you think? either its an eye or a lense, but the two together make it seem like a futuristic cyborg thing perhaps. simplify the layout more, but i do think the type and color are effective.
I agree that the eye or lens is a little disconcerting. It seems a little alien and I am not sure it is working with what you have going on so far. Maybe try blending the pixel idea with the lens a little more so that it becomes a unit. I do like the monochromatic idea you have for each of the programs.
ReplyDeleteI think the colors work well. It's a little bit busy on composition but the overall layout looks nice. I'm just not sure about the way you divided the panel to 3 areas... maybe you can try to invert the colors?
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